Edit(Glen)

This is my version of the video for the add, I went for a story that was close to the original I just minimized the story of Gus and Evelyn and focused more on the lose world that Gus inhabits that gets shaken by what he sees so he walks away and then is haunted by his memory, I think the ending is very weak because we didn't have enough shots to make it seem viable so i just rolled with it. This cut is not too fancy but I think that this is the strength of it and it is easy to understand what is happening during the story, if I had more cut away shots of the party you would not expect that the girl would be part of the story, just another face in the crowd.